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  1. RommelTJ

    [BoS writing contest] Feedback on LOST HILLS

    Yeah, I agree with you. That's why on the other post I asked you to be honest on how bad it was. The truth is that my first draft was over 5,000 words long and I heavily edited this in like 2 hours. I waned to repost my first story, but I saved over it. Oh well.
  2. RommelTJ

    Brotherhood of Steel contest results

    ok Got it, welsh.
  3. RommelTJ

    [BoS writing contest] Feedback on LOST HILLS

    So, here is my entry to the contest. Please tell me what you thought about it. It was supposed to be a inspired by pulp-western comedy, just like Fallout. Without further ado, here it is: --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- LOST HILLS by...
  4. RommelTJ

    Brotherhood of Steel contest results

    Changing Subject Changing Subject: Did anyone read my work? Be honest, how bad was it? Thanks, Rommel
  5. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest now closed

    I'd like to know this too. And also, how would you rate the average quality of entries? (Scale 1 to 10, 10 being best)
  6. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest

    Awww. Oh well, let's make it count since I don't feel like writing another one.
  7. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest

    I'm sure the NMA will appreciate your last minute spam. [Insert reference to Spam encounter in Fallout.]
  8. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest

    I've only submitted one story. So, from this comment I am taking that you've already read my submission? How was it? I am considering writing another one that gives more background to the story, but I have a lot of University homework...
  9. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest

    err Oh shoot, was this supposed to be canon? I wrote this as a fun story, not as a "book report". It barely makes sense but I think it's pretty funny. Maybe I'll resubmit it before Sunday.
  10. RommelTJ

    NMA Brotherhood of Steel Writing Contest

    Hello Hello everybody! I am a new member of the NMA forums, but I've been an avid fan of this site for a while now. I just submitted my entry called "LOST HILLS". It is a dark comedy and I hope I can beat you all. Like some of you, I had to severely edit my submission. My first draft...
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