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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    I don't want to toss out that concept, but I believe a lot of the Van Buren content is no longer canon. Consider the fact that the Vipers are a fledgling gang by New Vegas. The Daughters of Hecate were probably crushed by the Legion. Also, the New Vegas lore explains that the farthest east...
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    Fallout New Vegas: Doctor's Heart

    Well, in a love story.... You have lots of things you can do. I'll take CBS romantic comedy for example. In Mike & Molly, the couple is already established, there is no suspense because you know who they are and that they will always be together. What makes that story so good is watching that...
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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    I also think the Brotherhood invading Florida is far-fetch'd as well. The Brotherhood is after technology. The Capital wasteland chapter is about taking care of the locals. Even without Project Purity, I don't see the Brotherhood finding the need to move as far south as Florida. Movement in the...
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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    Heres an idea for Miami: How about it floods at a certain part of the day? I'm sure you could work on that concept, but I think it would be cool. Also, just my personal opinion, but the Boca Rotan have potential to be something beautiful and unique. Why not just make them Florida slavers...
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    Tagz' Fallout 4 outline

    I agree about the completely broken part. However, chores are what made Fallout interesting to me. Wandering a barren wasteland with only 8 shots in my rifle and a rusty knife, I need to find somewhere to eat and clean water, and at the same time keep my weapons in good condition. In Fallout...
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    Fallout New Vegas: Doctor's Heart

    I'm not sure posting character profiles is the way to go in the beginning. The appeal to a fallout fan-fic is to take something the audience is familiar with, and walking the audience through the story, littering the path with little surprises. Telling the audience that Maria will fall for this...
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    Tagz' Fallout 4 outline

    I disagree. Weapon maintenance is something that is very important for a post-apocalyptic world, but I believe it should be totally re-hauled. I had a vision for it, but I'm not ready to submit it to you all yet.
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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    It's got great potential! Just a few kinks to work out, even the actual games have that problem.
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    Fallout New Vegas: Scribes and Hunters

    Don't let me tell you what to do, sorry. Um, it's your project, do it however it comes naturally to you. What I posted was just advice. Take it or leave it.
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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    I figured he wanted you off searching for something. But could you imagine if the Overseer in Fallout 1 said that to the Vault Dweller? "Supermutants are attacking, so please find an army to defend us so we don't have to lift a finger". I say, treat it like "Ghost town gunfight". You know...
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    Fallout New Vegas: Scribes and Hunters

    Indeed. Don't be afraid of taking your time. Create a scene, explain the characters. Maybe start with Maria first meeting Veronica, and then it's something she said in their first conversation that Veronica just starts to be attracted to her. Incorporate the stuff in the game with it. Like...
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    Fallout: Southwestern War

    I think you should take your time with this. You're rushing. You described a lot of details in Vault 55 and even the raider camp that are essentially useless now that you've made him an NCR trooper. If you'd described life in the vault a little while longer, and then gradually moved into the...
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    Fallout New Vegas: Scribes and Hunters

    I don't wanna be that guy. But....
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    Noob's Fallout 4 outline

    Some of the ideas for locations, characters, even some factions and events are interesting. What you want to do with them, however, is not so good. I see you're trying to incorporate all the old ideals and mix them with new ideas, but it was kinda sloppy. Maybe if you slimmed this down...
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    Capital Wasteland (My Fallout 3 Sequel)

    The people of the Republic of Dave were gracious, and nursed me back to health. They asked nothing in return, but I couldn't neglect my desire to help them. Construction, foraging, tending to the sick and injured. Lorelei became something of a companion to me. Every day, she would come to...
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    Capital Wasteland (My Fallout 3 Sequel)

    When I woke up, I heard the sounds of music and voices. The first thing I laid my eyes on was a poster that said "Take It Back!" with wastelanders armed with hunting rifles. I quickly remembered the people who had saved me, and the girl who suggested I needed medical help. "Where am I?" A...
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    Wasteland Fan Soundtrack

    You wrote this Soundtrack? This is really good. These kinds of things can make or break a project. LOVE IT
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    Where will the next Fallout take place?

    I was playing around on New Vegas last night, and a thought popped into my head. What if the new game is centered around Mr. Bishop? I'm sure you all remember Bruce Isaac from the Talent Pool Quest. Well, he mentions sleeping with Mr. Bishop's daughter, and that he had to go all the way to...
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    Capital Wasteland (My Fallout 3 Sequel)

    "Threeeeeee Dogggg, How's it hanging Post Apocalyptia. I got some news for you today, take a look at this." My captors and I set off into the dark, with the land just barely lit by the sun as dawn was encroaching. I was slung over the back of a brahmin, and so I couldn't figure out...
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    Where will the next Fallout take place?

    I bet the Massachusetts Institute of Technology has a lot to do with it.
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