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Very sorry to hear about your health problems. Kinda has me on edge about the novel now, but you be fine. I hope you'll get better soon! :sad:

Allright, guess there's more waiting on the second chapter. I'll read it ASAP and let you know on my suggestions :grin:

Just read the first chapter. Well done! :clap: Here are a few suggestions though... Page 2, You type "We usually just fine" In the second paragraph (obvious typo) Page 3, You type "trust me, women are...." It doesn't start with a capital inside the brackets General: If I rememeber correctly, in...