writing

How would you rewrite him in a way so he's just as well-written as the likes of The Master, Caesar, Ulysses, Elijah and Mr House? We all know how he's a mindless psycopathic brute throught fallout 2's story, his first appearence being gunning down a entire family because he didn't feel like...

So I watched the Dialogue footage of Mass Effect Andromeda and I thought that the acting and the character dialogue looked pretty atrocious. It's all too calm, the main character sounds and looks like a college girl. The "crime lord" gives her the weakest threat she could give in the most...

i just finished watching A show on Netflix a couple of days back, I liked it at first, it had everything.good protagonist, atmosphere, cinematograph,etc. it was all good until they replaced, a interesting/complex antagonist, with a campy "I'm your evil long lost brother I want to kill you...