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[skinny fists]

Hey nma haven't posted in a while. Here's my latest fallout art.

I still have to post all those fallout sketches i've done for you guys.
thanks for looking!

 

[Wooz]

Sweet. It's a lot better than your last work.

However, I'll give you out some constructive critics, as you seem to put some effort on the pic and drawing in general:

Not a big fan of the mechanical way the cloth bends on your character's right leg and right arm, and how it's very similar to the texture on his shoulder pads thing. There's a bit too much of those folds, in a non-coherent folding pattern in the places I toldja. Likewise, not a fan of the mechanically-made-looking grass and similar mountains... I've got the feeling you filled them up because you didn't have an idea of what to put there. Don't, either leave it blank or come up with something. Unfinished sketches look good, too You could get rid of the few scratches on the light parts of your watercolor sky, the grungy pencil doesn't add anything there, just makes it dirty.

There. Hope it didn't sound too harsh

 

[SuAside]

cool. nice style.

but the weapon and way he hold it is wrong in so many ways...

 

[skinny fists]

Sweet. It's a lot better than your last work.

However, I'll give you out some constructive critics, as you seem to put some effort on the pic and drawing in general:

Not a big fan of the mechanical way the cloth bends on your character's right leg and right arm, and how it's very similar to the texture on his shoulder pads thing. There's a bit too much of those folds, in a non-coherent folding pattern in the places I toldja. Likewise, not a fan of the mechanically-made-looking grass and similar mountains... I've got the feeling you filled them up because you didn't have an idea of what to put there. Don't, either leave it blank or come up with something. Unfinished sketches look good, too You could get rid of the few scratches on the light parts of your watercolor sky, the grungy pencil doesn't add anything there, just makes it dirty.

There. Hope it didn't sound too harsh

it didn't sound harsh, i appreciate your feedback.. i have a real problem with texture, especially when painting a metalic texture. it always ends up looking like rough clothing folds or something. the grass and the mountains, yeah that was definitely just a space filler. i'm a prefectionist and can't leave anything blank.
by the way, i know it wasn't very well executed. i just wanted to see this sketch coloured in photoshop.
i appreciate your feed back though, and i'll try to improve on those flaws.

 

[patriot_41]

Anatomy, proportions, all that jazz . . . proportions, especially. The gun? it's too short. His left leg? Same problem. The moment you tart constructing your figures properly, coloring will come by itself. And to get better texturing just make sure you know the way different materials react to light. Simple, really.

Then again, you can safely ignore everything I say.

 

[x'il]

Very nice...it remids me of a certain style of drawing i've seen in french short movies.

 

[skinny fists]

doodle i colored in photoshop

 

[FeelTheRads]

Your style reminds me of Ben Templesmith, which I really like.
Was he a source of inspiration, maybe?

 

[Public]

I like those gloomy colours and kinda disturbing drawing style.


Keep up

 

[Daimyo]

I like those gloomy colours and kinda disturbing drawing style.


Keep up

I agree.

Get the proportions right and this will be very enjoyable.

 

[SuAside]

weapons sure aint your thing though...

 

[Jay-F]

You got some problems with the propotions of your characters. Especially the legs seem to be way to small and underdevoloped in comparsion to the rest of the body. In your second picture its the other way round concerning the arms.

 

[skinny fists]

thanks for the crits guys.

another photoshop doodle i did a while ago, never really posted it anywhere.

 

[Loen]

I like the style, but those weapons are horrible.

 

[skinny fists]

i can understand why everybody hates the weapon in the first image, but i thought the ak 47 was pretty accurate despite the handle i added.

 

[SuAside]

the relative proportions are all wrong. the receiver isn't high enough, the furniture isn't correct, the front sight post is horrible, lacks the safety lever and proper ejection port, etc.

 

[skinny fists]

i'm sorry that weapon is so horribly done.

 

[Brother None]

i can understand why everybody hates the weapon in the first image, but i thought the ak 47 was pretty accurate despite the handle i added.

Honestly I wouldn't worry about it. Gun nuts are gun nuts, listening to them is like listening to a biologist who whines about the impossibility of a monster you just drew or a structural engineer who notices the building you designed is at a 2 degree slant which would severely weaken its integrity.

It looks fine to me. It looks fine to anyone who isn't obsessed with it, so unless you're willing to invest a lot of time just to appease a fringe group, I wouldn't worry about it. Worry about Wooz' feedback instead.

 

[Loen]

i can understand why everybody hates the weapon in the first image, but i thought the ak 47 was pretty accurate despite the handle i added.

Honestly I wouldn't worry about it. Gun nuts are gun nuts, listening to them is like listening to a biologist who whines about the impossibility of a monster you just drew or a structural engineer who notices the building you designed is at a 2 degree slant which would severely weaken its integrity.

I'm morely complaining at how disproportional it is. Plus that little carrying handle is an eyesore.

 

[Daimyo]

Plus that little carrying handle is an eyesore.

I bet skinny meant that to be a sight rail, not a carrying handle ...