It's a very good first try, but as you said it sounds like a youngster who tries to sound like an older man. But basically it's like I imagine Cassidy.:D
I don't know why, but Steve the greeter in Broken Hills won't talk to me. He says I shall put my weapon away, even if I don't have any in my slots. Is it because of my companions?
It's kinda ridiculous that I can't solve that problem on my own, but well. I just can't heal my eye damage. My doctor skill is pretty bad (-4%) so I went to Redding to fix it. But the damn doc doesn't heal my eye. He just cured my radiation and the missing HP's. Do I really have to travel...