Yeah, I agree with you. That's why on the other post I asked you to be honest on how bad it was.
The truth is that my first draft was over 5,000 words long and I heavily edited this in like 2 hours.
I waned to repost my first story, but I saved over it. Oh well.
So, here is my entry to the contest. Please tell me what you thought about it. It was supposed to be a inspired by pulp-western comedy, just like Fallout.
Without further ado, here it is:
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LOST HILLS
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I've only submitted one story.
So, from this comment I am taking that you've already read my submission? How was it?
I am considering writing another one that gives more background to the story, but I have a lot of University homework...
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Oh shoot, was this supposed to be canon?
I wrote this as a fun story, not as a "book report". It barely makes sense but I think it's pretty funny.
Maybe I'll resubmit it before Sunday.
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Hello everybody!
I am a new member of the NMA forums, but I've been an avid fan of this site for a while now.
I just submitted my entry called "LOST HILLS". It is a dark comedy and I hope I can beat you all.
Like some of you, I had to severely edit my submission. My first draft...