No Mutant's Sky- WHY WON'T IT END????

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Hope that our heroes go through the Reddit Marsh, filled with ugly retrograde tribes that praise everything that lands from the sky... Even if it is an orbital strike.
 
Chapter 2 should be up tomorrow to please Doomsdayprepper.
He isn't going to want to miss this, and neither will you.

Lets say there's a lot more sex, and I'm trying to make one a bit more detailed.
 
Millim said:
Episode Two- No Todds, No Howards
Doomsdayprepper was fucking Mrs Britain of the year 2172 in the ass. His cock was pounding her tight asswhole as she begun to make that orgasm face you see in every porno. He just kept banging her… banging her until she let out a giant scream.
Doomsdayprepeer took out his dick (which looked liked a chewed up tiny little pencil) and came on her back. The amount of cum was minimal, barely enough to taste any flavour if she decided to drink it. Legend has it however, it’s saltier than the far East lands of Bethtown.
“That was… good?” the woman lied as she closed her eyes.
Doomsdayprepper was pleased with himself.
“Anytime” he smiled as he threw £25 her way.
The woman got mad.
“I’m no cheap whore!” she belted, throwing the money at him.
“Well you fuck like one” Doomsdayprepper laughed as he walked out the room.
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Baseless propaganda.
 
@Millim... Did you just kill yourself off? NO ONE is safe!

Also it's unclear who the main character of this fanfic is... I thought it was you but now...
 
Where's the cast list like with first one? I almost missed the second.
P.S.
You also misspelled my nickname. (0 states as zero, not 'O')
Other than that, too much decent grammar. Dissonant and internally inconsistent.
F4/10
 
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0wing said:
Where's the cast list like with first one? I almost missed the second.
P.S.
You also misspelled my nickname. (0 states as zero, not 'O')
Other than that, too much decent grammar. Dissonant and internally inconsistent.
F4/10
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I was thinking that myself, will edit in a sec.
 
R.Graves said:
You haven't even made an appearance yet...
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Exactly. This is one of those fancy stories where the actual main hero isn't introduced right away like Raiden in MGS2. Very experimental, very avant garde @Millim is the Kojima of NMA.
Ah, see. This post is the first post of Page two, I mentioned Metal Gear Solid two, the episode where what was thought to be the main character dies was Episode two. Bravo Millim you've done it again.
 
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